When it comes to handing peaces of writing you should have someone else, like another student or someone else read the peace and give you a opinion on it. You could call it conferencing with another person. But make sure it someone that well give you an honest opinion. But after that you could ask your teacher to read it first and give you a opinion. But fix the things that the people you conference with, so they can understand better. Once you do that you could hand it in. But remember follow the directions a teacher or who ever and try this during your work on the peace of writing.